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Ash with May OR Dawn? - Part 1

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It was a sunny day, Ash, Dawn and Brock were continuing their journey to complete the Sinnoh League

Dawn: I lost the last contest...
Brock: Don't be hard at yourself, at least May won, she's a friend
*Note: May And Ash batteled in a pokemon contest after Dawn lost, May then won the whole contest

So, it was a normal day, Ash going to get a badge, Brock tagging up with Ash and Dawn... Well, losing a contest

Dawn: Hey, this Narrator is annoying -_-
Ash: Whatever...
Brock: Look ahead!
Ash: It's a big... Show!

There was a huge stage above, Ash, Brock and Dawn ran up and saw a pokemon school

Dawn: It looks like someone is contributing a magic show to some school
Ash: How do you know it's a school contribution... and a magic show
Dawn: Look at the sign!

The sign said "Magic Show" and then under "charity contribution for the Pokemon Trainers School" Under was also written "Everyone welcome for free"

Dawn: Well, what are we waiting for?!
Brock: Let's sit down!

Ash and Friends sit down and the curtains go up

Hostess: Welcome to the annual Pokemon charity magic show!
Crowd: YAY!! WOOHOO!
Hostess: This year's magic show is full of many weird and wonderful acts!
Crowd: YAHOOOO!
Dawn: They like the site Yahoo?
Ash: Whatever...
Dawn: .....
Hostess: And now, we have the water pokemon act!

After many fun acts, Ash, Brock and Dawn felt refreshed, it was the final act

Hostess: This act is the most famous act! It is the first one we make, this typical pokemon trainer will have to struggle outside, helping her pokemon on the way, before the pokemon faints!
Crowd: COOL! WOW!
Dawn: What crazy someone would volunteer for this act?!
Ash: OMG! LOOK!

Ash points at the tank with the pokemon trainer inside

Brock: Its....
Dawn: Can't be!
Ash: IT'S MAY!

May was wrapped up with a rope in her hand and foot and with her was a wartortle

Ash: She could get killed, come on! Brock, Dawn, let's save her!
Dawn: Hmph...
Brock: Wait, ash! May is not dumb, she knows everything. She probably has been practicing this act for days now, no one is crazy enough to do this without practicing
Ash: But...
Dawn: Hmph, Brock is RIGHT Ash, now let's see Miss-Know-It-All break out!

May struggles to go out

Hostess: Any minute now, the trainer will be out!
May: GULP!! GLUB!!
Ash: She's drowning!
Brock: No she's not
Ash: Yes, she is, I'm not standing here watching a close friend of mine get drowned!

Ash runs upstage and goes to The Tank, Dawn Follows Ash

Dawn: Ash! Wait up!!
Ash: Can't Dawn! May's life is in my hands now!

Dawn stops, freezes, looks pale and then stares at Ash, trying to help May

Dawn: A-Ash.....
Ash: Don't worry May, I'll get you out of there
Brock: Quick, someone get an emergency pack!
Ash: MAY!!

Ash breaks the tank and holds May, Dawn grabs Wartortle

Ash: May! May! Please! Wake up!
Hostess: My word! Someone do mouth to Mouth!
Ash: I'll do it!
Dawn: Gasp! Ash?!
Ash: May...

Will Ash be able to rescue May? What About Dawn? Will Ash ever show interest to the desperate girl? To be continued...
I know, I didn't finish the other story, I will finish it soon!

Story by me, Characters by pokemon
© 2008 - 2024 sossli
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